Read the following paragraph.
Students attending schools with mandatory uniform
policies experience less pressure than do students who
must choose their wardrobes.
This is because school uniforms allow students and their parents to save
money and time. The financial investment in
uniforms at the beginning
of the school year is far more iS
economical than the purchase of
an entire wardrobe of designer clothes and trendy styles. Students who do
not have to
deliberate
what to wear each morning are able to invest their time
in more productive ways, such
as
studying for tests or finishing homework. Uniforms
may stifle students' self-expression, but there are man
other ways to
reveal one's individuality at school.
Which revision would best strengthen the author's main argument?
the omission of the author's point of view
the addition of more general
statements and
ideas
• the
correction of spelling and punctuation errors
O the inclusion of reputable: sources
and specific facts