write topic sentences, sufficient, relevant and clear details, and conclusion sentences
use at least 5 appropriate transition words or phrases between sentences
use gerunds as a subject for at least 2 sentences
use a variety of sentence structures: at least 3 compound and 3 complex sentences ( at least one complex sentence should have an adjective clause in it.)
use correct spellings, punctuations, sentence structures and grammar
use more level 3 vocabulary
use correct paragraph format with names, date, a topic, and indent