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Dramatic Poem but okay. Have another here for you guys, please don’t bring up, the embarrassment but brainly will help me. IF THERE IS A WAY TO FIX IT PLZ DO TELL ME!!! It is called “obsession”.

I don’t have an obsession
I am just Bound
It’s not a question
To have him around

People ask why
Why I love that guy
Because if he leaves I’ll cry
And if he never comes back I’ll die

Okay, this was when I was going through some times and I felt I needed someone to be my light for me because my light bulb was about burnt out. And that’s why it is soo dramatic. I now notice you can’t put yourself there and certainly not the other person because they can’t be there all the time.

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Good but

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Only criticism I have is that dramatic poems rhyme "cry" with "die" or "try" so often that it's sort of boring. If you altered the words used for rhyming, this would be fantastic!

My bf left me twice and went to my bsf and I was like yea this is cool nothin gonna happen.. but I never knew I'd miss him so much, I cry to go to sleep and I cut too much. Every time when I hear the name Jordan I break down. :'(

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